LostIdentity: Poems of the Mind

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[this is just some "poems" that i have written out of bordom or when i've over thunk something. they aren't that good but they're not completly terrible so read them and tell me what you think about them. i'm still working on this so don't b to harsh!! or copy anything without asking first :)]

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I got the chick with the anti cross from www.dollieden.com. it really goes with this poem, at least to me it does

Pictures
by LaNese Robinson(2004)

They say pictures tie us to our past
But do you really wont to be remember your past?
Was it that good
that you would wont to be reminded of it over and over again?
What if it wasn't, what would you do?
Would you burn it in a despert attempt to erase your past

They say pictures hold our memories
But some memories come in packages
Some memories are to painful to wonna remember
So what do you do with those pictures?
Do you burry them in a box, as you did in your heart
in an attempt not to remember?

They even say a pictures worth a thousand words
But what words do they really say
Do they say everythings ok?
Maybe they show you a time when you were happy...
truly happy
But what if it told you you were a disappointment
What if it told you you could be so much better
Would you listen
or would you silence it as you did your dreams?

Tuga War
by LaNese Robinson(2004)

Come this way
No go that way
that's all I ever hear
from you people!
You tell me to chose
And then you try to per sway me
that you're the better side
by buying me gifts and things
And then when I don't
You take my hand
and attempt to drag me over to your side
Well guess what!
I'm tired of your decisions controlling me
I'm tired of your mistakes effecting me
more then they do you
I can't take it any more
I don't know what to do
You got me so confused
I can't think straight
I'm stuck in the middle
Completely defenseless
And I'm hurting
Why can't you see that
Are you gonna come
and give me my life back
when this is all over?
No,
cuz you don't care about me
In fact,
you never cared about me
You don't even care about the game
It's about control
And you wont him to know you have it
You just wont to stick it to the man
And you're using me
to do it
But what happens to me
if you win?
Will you catch me
or let me fall?

My Fear
By LaNese Robinson(2005)

I've been moving at the same pace
since I was little
Passing up everything
that couldn't keep up
Everything looks so still
so slow
Too slow to wonna stay
But up ahead
I see speed
Adulthood is racing toward me
In a blink of an eye
I'll be bordering it
I'll be responsible for me
and no one will be there
to show me the way
I can't turn back
there's no road that that
takes me back
I sped through my childhood
and now I'm running adulthood
head first
But I can't speed up
There's to many traps
and holes to fall into
Why didn't I listen
and slow down
The only thing that waits for me now
is death

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Untitled 2004
By LaNese Robinson

When I look in the mirror
I see nothing
There’s no reflection
No trace of my soul
My face is a blur
My Identity has been lost

I’ve listened to you put me down
Tell me I’m stupid and I’ll never be anything
I even let you make me feel like I was beneath you
I couldn’t do anything without you
You made me believe that you were the only one in this world
who cared about me
You made me so insecure
that I denied all others

Do You Really Know Me?
By LaNese Robinson

Do you really know me,
when you say you know what I’m going through?
Do you really know what I’m thinking or what I plan to do?
Do you really know what I’ve been through,
how much pain and suffering I’ve been through?
Do you even realize how unhappy and stressed out I am?
You say you’ve done things your not proud of,
so why do I have to be so perfect and two-faced?
You say you’ve suffered and you wouldn’t let me suffer,
so why am I suffocating in my own unhappiness?
Now you say you’ve done things I wouldn’t dream of doing,
but do really know the things I’ve done?
So tell me do you really know me
or are you just being a MOM?

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I stole the pic from www.galleryone.com/images/hank/hanks-thinkin... so go check out their work!! or find it how i found it and just go to google and go to images and type in thinking. it should pop up on the 2nd page.

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2005-07-21 [LostIdentity]: just being a dork right now. one of the poems u can tell is imcomplete but it will be fixed when i return to indy in august. right now i'm in Va. and i can't really fix anything because my book is at home. read and make comments if you want.

2005-08-13 [Aarons Girl]: looks good

2005-08-13 [LostIdentity]: thanks

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